u/FuriMinxue67

I've written a psychological dark fantasy novel called "Crimson In Red: Tainted Ascendant" on Scribble hub, and despite being on the third volume with almost 60 chapters in, I haven't gotten even a single feedback comment. I used a prose-script hybrid format to deliver my originality, and the story shifts to multiple POVs with a non linear storyline. That said, I needed genuine criticism or praise to know my weaknesses and strengths. I would highly appreciate any feedback, so please try it out.

And yes, my novel subverts most expectations. If jjk, Tokyo ghoul and berserk had a three-way, my novel would be born— that kinda stuff.

I've written a psychological dark fantasy novel called "Crimson In Red: Tainted Ascendant" on Scribble hub, and despite being almost 60 chapters in, I haven't gotten even a single feedback comment. I used a prose-script hybrid format to deliver my originality, and the story shifts to multiple POVs with a non linear storyline. That said, I needed genuine criticism or praise to know my weaknesses and strengths. I would highly appreciate any feedback, so please try it out.

What could be the problem? What makes my novel ordinary or boring? That's all.