u/FutureTransmission_6

I’m working on a short Sci-Fi video dealing with dystopian AI concepts. The style is an analog/leaked data log format, so it relies heavily on atmosphere and conceptual visuals rather than fast-paced editing.

I just redesigned my entire approach for this one because my last attempt got completely ignored by the algorithm. I’m dropping the link in the comments.

I'm looking for some honest critiques:

1. Is the hook (first 10 seconds) engaging enough to make you stay?
2. Does the visual style fit the cold AI vibe, or does it feel boring?
3. General thoughts on the thumbnail?

Roast it if you have to, I just want to improve. Thanks!