First post - I am working on some short film I have only teaser cut and i would like to know how you feel about it and if possible I would like to know your stories for this cut
We open with an establishing shot — a boy, a girl, and a bike. Just enough to understand their world.
Then we cut to the boy standing, looking directly at her with quiet love in his eyes.
Cut to the girl sitting on the bike, helmet on, visor open. Only her eyes are visible — and they're looking at him with this effortless cuteness.
He closes her visor.
She opens it. Different expression. Still cute.
He closes it again.
She opens it again. Funnier this time.
He closes it. She opens it with a ridiculous expression.
He laughs. Subtle. Real.
Then we cut to the same framing — her on the bike, only her eyes visible. But this time something is wrong. There's sadness. Anger. A small streak of blood on her forehead. Tears in her eyes.
Screen goes black.
Then two quick shots — her driving that bike aggressively. One close up of her face while driving. One shot of the bike blasting past the camera at full speed.
Cut.