u/Glass_Manager8847

For the most part, I would love feedback on dialogue structure. I love the “points” I am making in my dialogue exchange, but I keep questioning myself when I read it. The more I read it, the more I think it’s “meh.”

Either way, this is my first time doing creative writing, outside of poetry. I’d love any feedback on working on dialogue, not being so rigid in my writing (if that’s present), and whether the content itself seems engaging, despite the lack of background information.

Looking forward (with anxiousness lol) to everyone’s feedback!

I’ve read Piranesi and it has been one of my favorite books of all time! I want other books that give me that same feeling. If it helps any, I love sublime and surrealist art, and I love to read any books that lean into that.

I just ordered The Starless Sea.

Thanks in advance!