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I'm working on a folk inspired eldritch horror story, and I've broken the plot into 3 different perspectives. The first is kind of a buddy cop duo, the second a politician, and the third being a father and his daughter. I've been playing around with it, but I've noticed I keep coming back to the same details when they describe fear. I'm not sure how to make them really pop out from one another and really feel like different people. Like the father focuses a lot on his daughter in his thoughts, the politician has a very textbook way of thinking, but I'm really not sure how else to show the differences beyond that. Any books that swap between perspectives that might help with this? Anything I should be doing/avoiding?
u/Glittering-Slip2879 — 18 days ago