Looking for first impressions on my LN comic's looks
Hello everyone! It's been a while since I last posted here. After finishing the LN OC requests and telling about my own LN OC here, I diverted my attention from this fandom and thought I'd not return until new content came out (I'm especially waiting for TSON Season 2) :3
But a few months ago I got inspired for a new Little Nightmares project — a comic (which I'm planning to post on this sub reddit as well), featuring two original characters of mine as main protagonists and one of the official characters in the latest part of the story.
I'd had a lot of fun interacting with this community, so here I am, looking for first impressions on the graphics of the comic. As I don't have a graphic tablet, I have to draw with my finger on the phone, and so I tried to adjust my art style to be able to draw decent pictures (especially backgrounds, which are the main problem) in a considerably small amount of time.
I don't want the comic to repulse the readers with its looks, so I want to find the balance between what I can afford and what is decent enough not to disappoint the potential reader :'3.
Here are a few panels I can show so you can criticize or give advice. In general, I'd just like to know if you'd even read a comic like this? I'll post the designs of new Residents and spoil some extra locations as well later, but I have to decide on the artstyle first.