u/Happy_Interaction929

The novel is called Before We Fall Asleep. (9000 words)
The theme is invisible pain — the things people carry from another person, whether the cause knows what they caused or not.

I am not looking for editing or critique. I am looking for someone to read the first chapter and I have been writing this alone for months without a single reader in my social circle. I am not asking for praise. I am asking for a genuine human response.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dJrp9H7MoZ28lhXT1nT7Cho6jhW_04-GkCyPhGikqbk/edit?tab=t.0

thank you in advance for reading this

i have been writing it alone for months without a single reader in my social circle (non-native english speaker). I am not looking for editing. I just need someone to read the first chapter and tell me honestly what they felt. i want to know how people really feel reading it.

thank you in advance :)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dJrp9H7MoZ28lhXT1nT7Cho6jhW_04-GkCyPhGikqbk/edit?tab=t.0

.I have been writing it alone for months without a single reader in my social circle (non-native english speaker). I am not looking for editing. I just need someone to read the first chapter and tell me honestly what they felt. i want to know how people really feel reading it.
thank you in advance :)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dJrp9H7MoZ28lhXT1nT7Cho6jhW_04-GkCyPhGikqbk/edit?tab=t.0