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The novel is meant to provide the lore of a miniature wargame I'm designing.

I was wondering if the first chapter is interesting enough to keep you reading, or if it would just work as a hook in case military/semi-hard-scifi that leans on philosophical/societal topics is not your taste, but feel free to provide any feedback here, or comment on the doc:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13N8UOYNgAqMiom2GLGalOAmLfrN3c_u26UgdY-Jcubg/edit?usp=sharing