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How on the nose is the message I want to convey?

Smoke fills my lungs
reminds me of the exhale, your tongue.
The warmth fills everything
the craving, I miss in between.

I yearn for your kiss
subtlety makes me remiss.
Life without you, it feels like my shtick
hold on dear, we may lose our grip.

You make me feel so alive,
ecstasy on my tongue, that's how I survive
I yearn for your love
please hold your head way up above

In silence I hear everything
Maybe our issues don't mean a thing
We're together it feels like a dream
Lean into me, let out your scream

Baby, put your hand on the wheel
we may get too close, this feeling is unreal
Someone wake me from this slumber
my heart wishes for no other

Baby come with me, please get in
I need you under my skin

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u/Hot_Advertising_6949 — 19 hours ago
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How on the nose is the message I’m trying to convey?

Smoke fills my lungs
reminds me of the exhale, your tongue.
The warmth fills everything
the craving, I miss in between.

I yearn for your kiss
subtlety makes me remiss.
Life without you, it feels like my shtick
hold on dear, we may lose our grip.

You make me feel so alive,
ecstasy on my tongue, that's how I survive
I yearn for your love
please hold your head way up above

In silence I hear everything
Maybe our issues don't mean a thing
We're together it feels like a dream
Lean into me, let out your scream

Baby, put your hand on the wheel
we may get too close, this feeling is unreal
Someone wake me from this slumber
my heart wishes for no other

come with me, please get in
I need you under my skin

reddit.com
u/Hot_Advertising_6949 — 19 hours ago