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My first poem

My first poem! Slightly inspired by poetrustic by Charles Dalton from DPS, feedback would be greatly appreciated

Never-ending chores, never-ending lists

I run a mile and yet have not moved

got to do more, got to do more

My mind contains too much, and yet too little

My body begs, for rest I will never give it

got to be more, got to be more

The unfinished papers spread, like the ashes of my dying mind

I must

Do more

I

Must

Be

More

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u/Hot_Newspaper_2530 — 11 days ago