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My first poem
My first poem! Slightly inspired by poetrustic by Charles Dalton from DPS, feedback would be greatly appreciated
Never-ending chores, never-ending lists
I run a mile and yet have not moved
got to do more, got to do more
My mind contains too much, and yet too little
My body begs, for rest I will never give it
got to be more, got to be more
The unfinished papers spread, like the ashes of my dying mind
I must
Do more
I
Must
Be
More
u/Hot_Newspaper_2530 — 11 days ago