u/IamBeyoncralways

Image 1 — First page! Would you keep reading?

Image 2 — First page! Would you keep reading?

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First page! Would you keep reading?

This is a fantasy romance. Based on these first pages, would you keep going? Why or why not.

u/IamBeyoncralways — 6 days ago

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Second attempt - feedback request on new POV

I’m looking to submit this soon to an agent who made a request. This chapter is new though and I don’t have much time for a second beta reader for this one chapter (chapter 3 has been beta read once and I made edits since). Any thoughts or feedback would be appreciated!

u/IamBeyoncralways — 9 days ago

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Looking for feedback on this first page of a new POV

This is the start of chapter 3 and I’m struggling with it. It’s a new POV so treat it like you’re just jumping in. Any feedback welcome.

u/IamBeyoncralways — 10 days ago