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Story feeeback [1900]
I don‘t have a handle on the prose yet, and I’ve mixed past and present tense in first-person narrative. I am honestly not sure which way to go with it. And I write from my hip. I’ve not done an outline or much more. I’m probably doing this all wrong.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1--TGeUypElKMyx2pWQpn3_hvLlC3pvgNBlP1_tNAJkQ/edit?usp=drivesdk
u/Ichimura9000 — 7 days ago