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I will preface this by saying I am by no means a writer. I enjoy literature, but I am less than a beginner myself. This is for an intro to literature class and will be half of my final. My professor has really pushed me to write poetry, which is something I have been afraid of because I know it has many rules.

On that, I would love general feedback on this whole thing. What works, what doesn’t, what needs to be rearranged and changed?

I am also struggling between titles? Initially i liked “First born, last place” But i also thought of “Missed connections” while i was cleaning due to the “email” nature of this piece.

Thank you so so much in advance!