u/Immediate-Stock1999

Guys check out this verse I've been working on

I've been working on this for about 2-3 months

By the way, it's a made-up verse, the character that's mentioned isn't real, I made him up

When it comes to rhymes that are secreted, I can't be feated

I've cracked the code in the rap game to make me beat it

I could enter in that house of hip-hop with a key petered

A goal we'll reach for 'til we meet it

If somebody got me deeded, I could've re-keyed it

I had someone to help me before he teetered  

Everything was looking good until he fleed it 

In his mind, with rap, we freed it and went "Gee,we did?

Cause we both agree that trap and rage should be re-breeded and re-steeded

Him and I always say that most new rappers are really mid

Then he heeded if he could join me and also get retreated 

He pleaded to not make me lead it

me cleated and Vegeta'd

He even decreed that he'd hit me with a fresh tree weeded 

But he's blown out of the water so much, the Nile's getting re-reeded

If you face music like you're talking to your speaker, how am I being defeated   Don't think I wouldn't let you be greeted to be sleeted with me heated ensuring you get depleted and deleted (speed flow on this line and the last line)

Any meady skit of yours always gets me Deep Heated

Tell me you're not worse than Macca's chips pre-heated then re-heated

Just admit that any current preceded rappers are just repeated                     

You know you've heard me read that book of hip-hop which I hold dearly, so don't try to re-read it

I try and put my talents to the test on a 3D grid, so don't say "He cheated!",  

I won't be seated wrecking any CD hit, which I'm elite at, so now you'll see me lit

I can say with pride, I rock a scar as if my knee bleeded  

My rap position's like Madonna's dad: preach, he did, which we needed

My opps might as well go out shopping for KSI's hairline with how they're receded

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u/Immediate-Stock1999 — 10 days ago