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The extra clause, the only fairness link?

The extra clause, the only fairness link?

Chapter 1

Halfway through the reading of the will, my sister-in-law, Luciana Cottrell, let out a sudden laugh.

This was no accidental slip of composure. It was a smug, guttural sound of relief, followed by a broad smile she didn't even bother to hide.

She tugged at my brother Hudson Elton's sleeve. He stayed quiet, but he sat up a little straighter in his chair.

I was stationed on the far side of the room.

From the time I turned eighteen until now, at forty, I had always hugged the fringes at every family gathering.

The lawyer, Darnell Delves, paused and flipped to the next page.

He shot me a glance, and there was something off about his expression.

"There is an additional clause to the will," he announced.

Luciana's smile froze on her lips.

***

Darnell was in his early fifties, wearing gold-rimmed glasses.

He had been appointed by the city's notary office and had absolutely zero prior connection to our family.

Still, I couldn't quite shake the way he'd just looked at me.

He didn't look at me like a stranger; he looked at me like he actually knew me.

I didn't have time to dwell on it.

Hudson beat everyone to the punch.

"Mr. Delves, what additional clause?"

He kept his tone totally even, but his hand rested on the table, fingers drumming against the wood.

Whenever Hudson got nervous or uncertain, he tapped his fingers.

It was a tell he'd had since we were kids.

Darnell completely ignored the question. He set the document down and said, "Reading this additional clause requires meeting a specific condition first. I need to verify something."

He turned toward me.

"Ms. Rachel Elton, correct?"

"Yes."

"You are Mr. Mateo Elton's daughter?"

"I am."

"Do you have the caregiving records or expense receipts from Mr. Elton's hospital stays?"

It was a bizarre question.

The whole room stared at me.

Even my mother, Natalia Homer, turned her head. She was in a black dress today, her hair pulled back in a tight knot.

Her face didn't hold a single ounce of grief for her freshly deceased husband, and her expression sent a very clear, familiar warning, "Do not cause trouble."

"I do," I said.

It wasn't like I had deliberately archived them; there were just so many.

Over the course of twenty years and seventy-three hospital stays, I had shoved every receipt into plastic grocery bags until they piled up into a full cardboard box.

I didn't keep them out of some obsessive need for meticulous bookkeeping.

I kept them because I was constantly forced to produce them—for reimbursements, community aid applications, and health insurance claims.

I just never threw them away.

"Good." Darnell jotted a note on his papers, then looked back up. "Verification complete. The condition to read the additional clause has been met."

"Wait a minute," Luciana said, jumping to her feet.

She was wearing a dark green cardigan over her outfit, her short curly hair perfectly styled. She had clearly touched up her makeup before heading out today; her lipstick was a shade darker.

"What do you mean, an additional clause? Why weren't we told about this?"

"Mr. Mateo Elton established this additional clause separately at the city's notary office in 2019," Darnell replied. "It is a valid component of the will."

"In 2019?" Luciana's voice pitched up an octave. "By then he was already—"

She caught herself.

In 2019, my dad had been paralyzed for thirteen years.

Luciana clearly wanted to ask how a man in his physical condition could possibly draft a will, but she snapped her mouth shut.

Describing him like that out loud was a little too crass, and she wasn't dumb enough to say it with the extended family sitting right there.

My mother's lips parted, but she didn't say a word, either.

From my folding chair way over on the far side of the room, I suddenly really appreciated my seat.

It gave me a great vantage point.

I could see every single look on their faces.

Hudson's fingers kept drumming against the table, tapping twice as fast as before.

Darnell squared up his stack of documents and addressed the room.

"Before I read the additional clause, I must finish reading the primary will."

"Read it," Hudson said.

Darnell went back to reading.

The real estate, a 120-square-meter house in our hometown, went to Hudson.

The savings, totaling 106,000 dollars, went to Hudson.

The 16,000-dollar life insurance payout went to Hudson.

With every asset named, Luciana's smile stretched a little wider.

By the time Darnell finished, her posture had completely relaxed.

She shot me a quick look, flashing a crystal-clear message across the room.

"See? You get nothing."

I didn't look at her.

I kept my eyes glued to the second page in Darnell's hand, fixated on the red notary stamp in the bottom right corner.

He was holding it too far away for me to actually read the text, but my father had left that document for me.

I had no idea what it said.

But he had left it.

Twenty years, and he left it.

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