u/Impressive_Guess_711

This is my first writing outside of my comfort zone of extremely dark works. I would love to hear what other think about it. Should I just go back to something I'm good at? Or am I on to something? Thank you ahead of time..

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u/Impressive_Guess_711 — 23 days ago

Out of the darkness,

The wicked did call;

On the bellies of serpents,

The demons did crawl.

​Out of their wormy beds,

The wicked emerged,

As the lightness in the souls

The devil did purge.

​With malice infused,

In the rot and the bone,

The demons take flesh

To make earth their throne

With malice infused,

In the rot and the bone,

The demons take flesh

To make earth their throne.

​The humble were gathered,

To the heavens they flew;

The skies claimed the sinners,

And left but the few.

​Through the eyes of demons,

Satan could see,

That God had left him

An ironic decree.

​The small sins were pardoned,

The "righteous" were shown—

That pride was the harvest

The devil had sown.

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u/Impressive_Guess_711 — 23 days ago

Out of the darkness,

The wicked did call;

On the bellies of serpents,

The demons did crawl.

​Out of their wormy beds,

The wicked emerged,

As the lightness in the souls

The devil did purge.

​With malice infused,

In the rot and the bone,

The demons take flesh

To make earth their throne

With malice infused,

In the rot and the bone,

The demons take flesh

To make earth their throne.

​The humble were gathered,

To the heavens they flew;

The skies claimed the sinners,

And left but the few.

​Through the eyes of demons,

Satan could see,

That God had left him

An ironic decree.

​The small sins were pardoned,

The "righteous" were shown—

That pride was the harvest

The devil had sown.

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u/Impressive_Guess_711 — 23 days ago