Sooo....Im trying digital art :) usually im a traditional artist as in pencil and paper. I have SO much respect for digital artists it seems so hard. So uh...of course im doing vi hehe. But yall. Does this look like an eye, I spent time drawing and shading the little lines, im doing a realistic vi cuz I SUCK at animation style drawings. But does it just look warped? Like...I feel like its weird. Any tips for extra detail? Im working on mobile and with my fingers cuz I dont have fancy ipads or pens and stuff. I cant get enough detail and its driving me crazy.

I Just got the arcane notebook like an hour ago and I've been staring at this stupid sketch of mine and i think the eyes are too far apart or something but it look SO wrong to me. Its in my style which I think is less cartoon and more realism but idk. Something is so wrong and I need to fix it lol. (Its jinx btw) ignore the white scribble at the bottom, I blurred my name :)

Im working on my JINX impression for absolutely no reason, criticism and tips would be appreciated. Idk if it even sounds close 😅 "ignore the you feel it?" Line, I messed up terribly.