u/JacketRich9148

Image 1 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

Image 2 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

Image 3 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

Image 4 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

Image 5 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

Image 6 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

Image 7 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

Image 8 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

Image 9 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

Image 10 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

Image 11 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

Image 12 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

▲ 5 r/writingfeedback

I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

u/JacketRich9148 — 8 days ago

▲ 14 r/writingfeedback

I am 17 and hope be a published author at some point and so I recently submitted this piece of work to a short story competition and was just looking for any feedback or critiques

u/JacketRich9148 — 9 days ago