u/JacketRich9148

Image 1 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing
Image 2 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing
Image 3 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing
Image 4 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing
Image 5 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing
Image 6 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing
Image 7 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing
Image 8 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing
Image 9 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing
Image 10 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing
Image 11 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing
Image 12 — I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

I very recently posted another short story in this subreddit and received some very helpful feedback and so I decided I might as well post a few others I've written and ask for help in choosing the best of the four and for any feedback or critiques of my writing

u/JacketRich9148 — 8 days ago

I am 17 and hope be a published author at some point and so I recently submitted this piece of work to a short story competition and was just looking for any feedback or critiques

u/JacketRich9148 — 9 days ago