[1115] Daughter of Wrath - CH 13
This is a flashback scene from my story, Daughter of Wrath. Thoughts? And 1 question in particular: what did you think Sera wanted Celeste to do?
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u/Jraywang — 5 days ago
u/Jraywang
This is CH 2 of a novel I'm revisiting. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ezXWneAHRd7fjo5EwpjbPiBH_0TVMBRSffarCvJ0-0g/edit?usp=sharing
My main question is around pacing. Do you feel that the story is too slow or is this a good investment in setting up the overall stakes and characters?
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u/Jraywang — 27 days ago