u/Junie_Bug1129

I wrote with a different idea in mind but just ended up landing on some kind of set up for a plot. Im a very inexperienced writer. I think I could turn this into a longer story though. Im just looking for help with tweaking my style towards something easier to transition and probably less overly descriptive?

TW: Death/Grief

Putting a link because it’s above the word limit for these posts. Im a reddit newbie so Im sorry if the post is weird or wrong, ill do my best to edit it accordingly. ( Ive already been auto modded once unfortunately… )

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11a6u4uP-Wosue04orTHiX093Yp\_MXheD2Elw\_ulWC-c/edit?usp=drivesdk