u/Just-Fortune-6149

I have been writing the description of a building to practice so I'd appreciate some constructive and detailed critique (whether the description is too confusing, unorganized, underdetailed, overdetailed...).

I had wanted it to be the description of a liminal space building, so here's the link to the google doc with the full context and details of it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mtCq3bx2XX9f8ufXI0j3C6oIZdLFl-bUZ7q03MruKUE/edit?usp=sharing