Hey everyone,
I wanted to get some real feedback from people who actually understand content, so posting here.
Quick context about me:
I’ve been working in the YouTube space for about 4 years mostly running faceless channels. I’ve generated around $30K from them, so I understand the backend (ideas, thumbnails, packaging, etc.).
Now I’m trying to transition into building a personal brand where I share what I’m learning + help creators improve their content.
And that’s where I feel I’m struggling.
I recently uploaded a video, and honestly I know it’s not where it should be yet.
I’m specifically trying to improve:
- Hook & first 30 seconds
- Retention (keeping people watching)
- Making content feel less scripted
- Overall engagement
👉 Links:
https://youtu.be/hw2yzPCVX7U
https://youtu.be/NfSMwBXHJkg
https://youtu.be/PHJQcprbH1s
I’d really appreciate honest feedback even if it’s harsh.
Especially:
- At what point would you click off?
- What feels weak or boring?
- Does it feel like I know what I’m talking about, or not yet?
- What would you improve first?
I’m not claiming to be an expert here just someone actively working on getting better and documenting the process.
Appreciate any input 🙏