u/Left-Butterscotch613

A little while ago i posted asking how I can achieve the style on the first slide, the second slide is my first attempt and the third slide is my most recent attempt :)

All credit for the first 2 drawings go to this artist: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/22237957 !!

The last picture is my attempt at the artstyle, i feel like there is something missing but I’m not sure what 😭 any help would be greatly appreciated:)