u/LeftBerry6877

Entering a foreign space
Where dimmer lights illuminate
Exposing weathered paths to somewhere deeper

The roots will rise above our heads
And tie us both to separate beds
And wear us down to nothing but a memory

O’ deception

Can old remains still be of note?
For I am one in solemn float
Forever drifting further from direction

And I cut away the final tie
The tether tied to you and I
As we slip away sink beneath the memory

O’ deception

Beneath the soil there lay a man
Once held the world within in his hand
But threw it to the woman he loved dearly

And she clapped her hands in mocking tone
And he felt the force in every bone
Till all remained of her was the memory

O’ deception

A stairway on that weathered path
A promise that could lead us back
To where we once danced beneath the moonlight

But the steps were drawn with tired eyes
Deceived by a mind he now despised
And at his feet the stairway fades to memory

O’ deception

The light now flickers on and off
As I become a desperate moth
Aimlessly attracted to the mystery

And confusion lays with me tonight
And lays the way you used to lie
No closure could compose this tortured memory

O’ deception

(First time ever showing my work off I wanna know where I’m at with it)

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u/LeftBerry6877 — 17 days ago

Entering a foreign space
Where dimmer lights illuminate
Exposing weathered paths to somewhere deeper

The roots will rise above our heads
And tie us both to separate beds
And wear us down to nothing but a memory

O’ deception

Can old remains still be of note?
For I am one in solemn float
Forever drifting further from direction

And I cut away the final tie
The tether tied to you and I
As we slip away sink beneath the memory

O’ deception

Beneath the soil there lay a man
Once held the world within in his hand
But threw it to the woman he loved dearly

And she clapped her hands in mocking tone
And he felt the force in every bone
Till all remained of her was the memory

O’ deception

A stairway on that weathered path
A promise that could lead us back
To where we once danced beneath the moonlight

But the steps were drawn with tired eyes
Deceived by a mind he now despised
And at his feet the stairway fades to memory

O’ deception

The light now flickers on and off
As I become a desperate moth
Aimlessly attracted to the mystery

And confusion lays with me tonight
And lays the way you used to lie
No closure could compose this tortured memory

O’ deception

(I have no idea if this shit is good or not I never show anyone these things)

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u/LeftBerry6877 — 17 days ago

You fly like a note too high to be heard
But baby you know I’m a flightless bird
As I wait for when you meet the ground
I’ll track that note, the whispering sound

It sits right where it can’t be found

I leap a soaring sail of flight
Where earth is fading fast from sight
To meet your dangerous altitude
But wind has spit up bitten chewed

For we can’t dance a turbulent tune

I’ll borrow wings from those without use
And grab ahold some Ill-gotten truce
For no command from gust of war
Can beckon a man who only wants more

Will all be resolved When we join at the floor?

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u/LeftBerry6877 — 17 days ago