u/Lolwhatever93

I'm deep in revision on my sapphic sports romance, and debating how readers would respond to one of my MCs sleeping with other people during the DNOTS phase of the book. The couple is fully broken up at that point, and this person is definitely the One Who Got Hurt during the breakup, not the One Who Did The Hurting. The sex is more montagey/implied than explicit and on the page.

My goal is to query this project for tradpub, so thoughts specific to that would be particularly useful. TIA!