Edit: This is NOT a story as of now. This is mostly just internal monologue. This "story" is still in its pre-writing state. Please take note of this. I will add a plot, characters, character development, and a setting soon. This entire story once finished may circulate around a man vs self conflict.

I do not intend to promote this but rather to get feedback. Since I've only started writing just a week ago, I feel like this is a pretty good start. What do you guys think?

All of this was written with pure hatred and negativity (idk if you guys consider this pure hatred), as the title says itself (I was thinking of my own negative thoughts while writing this so I should be weird for that lol)

^(Please do understand that I am just a beginner writer. I do not mean to share a story some of you may find horrible. If you want, I will leave this subreddit out of due respect. )

I love this song lol,

This took up to a day without counting breaks, hope yall like it!

^(I sincerely apologize for the very severe delay of the audio and the video. My screen recorder is really bad at doing its job)

Number 5 is really difficult, lets see if someone can get it

(Theres one extra there from Deltarune, i think its really obvious what is)