u/MechanicRepulsive304

we're a pharma sales support agency based in india, and i present a monthly update to about 40 ppl, mix of my team and crm, sales support depts.

The folks enjoy it as i get useful questions, they even follow up later and it's really something they look forward to as it helps them to get the entire picture, the fact ppl look at me not the screeen. But however the deck is inert and not really helping me

Things i have tried that didn't work like adding images, which turned into slideshow with stock media in it and made it worse fr. Using a template made it feels too generic. Shorting out in points also didn't work

What shd I do?

im applying for an in-house analytics role after four years at a services firm. My strongest project involved fixing a reporting pipeline for a large client, but I cannot name the client, exact revenue or their internal tools. I used multiple resume writers which suggested a polished impact bullet.

I stripped it back because it sounded more specific than i could defend. The version I have now says the industry, the scale in broad terms, the type of pipeline, and the reporting delay we reduced. It reads less impressive, but it is true and I can discuss the method

Hiring managers, is global retail client plus a bounded scale enough context? Or does anonymizzing everything makes a candidate's work feel generic no matter how real it was?