u/MegFlames

As the title suggests, I am incredibly new to this and have had absolutely no feedback at all about my first pages. I have actually completed the first rough draft of a full novel at about 73,000 words, but before I start the rigorous editing process, I want to hear your feedback on whether you’d keep reading or if you’d skip it.

I didn’t want to post too much, as my first chapter and reveals are a bit longer, but happy to include the full first chapter if anyone is interested or that could give more information.

Note: this does NOT actually turn into a love story about Maren and Cole.