u/MilfordAcademic

Looking for feedback

So I wrote a pilot script back in 2007 when I was in college.

I found it about a year ago and have spent the past year re-writing it. It's 63 pages. Anyone have any interest? Would gladly read yours in exchange.

I'm looking for honest feedback. Be harsh, be judgmental, be brutal...it's all good. If you're interested, shoot me a DM.

Edit to include logline:

"After an unsealed FBI report ties his former college roommate to a near-terror attack, a drifting behavioral analyst is forced to revisit his senior year and confront the warning signs he missed while distracted by his own unraveling life."

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u/MilfordAcademic — 7 days ago