u/NightRage7

hi guys , so i'm looking for feedback about the concept in my dark fantasy novella , i spent the last month designing characters and building a world , a brutal world full of wars , deception , betrayal , literally no place for the weak , however in my story , the main character is a villain , yes , a villain , not the classic hero who wins in the end with some friendship power , or get saved by the plot , in my novel , if the character is weak and lost , he deserve it , i'm not keeping a weak character around as a fan service , my philosophy is sometimes dark , sometimes too realistic It's a psychological autopsy. for each character in the novel , every victory costs a piece of him that never grows back. my friends saying that i'm too dark , and ppl loves the soft romantic novel , or when The hero faces impossible odds. He wins. He gets the girl. He rules wisely. Happy ending.there is no such a thing in my novel , its close to berserk , so what do you think guys