Been writing a story, but I've been struggling with plot points. Could you give me some comments?

So, for the last few weeks I've been writing a story for myself. Simply as a creative exercise. It's about this girl Mary, who has a crush on a half-time worker from the local farm, and fellow student, Cole. She's been trying to get his attention for quite a while now, but he always politely declines, saying that he is busy. Not willing to take a "No" for an answer, she looks for a way to interact with him during his work. It is at this moment that she finds an old crystal bottle in her grandmother's house, which says that it can bring someone's love to them if they drink its contents. She takes the bottle home and drinks it. Quickly, she is transformed into a cow. After understandably freaking out, she reasons that THIS is the way to connect with Cole. So after the effects wear off, she goes to the farm, transforms and approaches him. He is quite friendly to her in this new form, and so they spend more and more time together. After this part, I am struggling on how to continue the story. I know that I want Cole to turn into an animal as well, but I don't know how to do it in a natural way. You guys got any ideas?

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u/Nora_IGuess — 8 hours ago

Been writing a romance story, but I've been struggling with some plot points. Could you give me some tips?

So, for the last few weeks I've been writing a story for myself. Simply as a creative exercise. It's about this girl Mary, who has a crush on a half-time worker from the local farm, and fellow student, Cole. She's been trying to get his attention for quite a while now, but he always politely declines, saying that he is busy. Not willing to take a "No" for an answer, she looks for a way to interact with him during his work. It is at this moment that she finds an old crystal bottle in her grandmother's house, which says that it can bring someone's love to them if they drink its contents. She takes the bottle home and drinks it. Quickly, she is transformed into a cow. After understandably freaking out, she reasons that THIS is the way to connect with Cole. So after the effects wear off, she goes to the farm, transforms and approaches him. He is quite friendly to her in this new form, and so they spend more and more time together. After this part, I am struggling on how to continue the story. I know that I want Cole to turn into an animal as well, but I don't know how to do it in a natural way. You guys got any ideas?

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u/Nora_IGuess — 19 hours ago
▲ 19 r/zelda

[ALL] If Link could turno into an animal in the next Zelda game, which would you like?

Simply write down which animal or creature you would like to see Link turno into! You can add concepts for how it'd work in-game, or just say whatever weird and counterintuitive it seems!

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u/Nora_IGuess — 14 days ago
▲ 111 r/furry

So, for the last few weeks, my boyfriend has been acting rather cow-like (Don´t know how else to put it). He moos ramdomly, mostly at home, and has been acting like he likes his weight a lot more (He was usually vocal about not liking it). I didn´t really mind it, but I also found it kinda weird, but I didn´t really say anything.

Yesterday, I found him putting on some type of bodysuit. When I asked him what he was wearing, he said "It´s ... my cow costume!". He put it on, and I must say... It looked AMAZING. It was white with little black spots, a tail, and even udders, alongside a little hat shaped like a snout. It looked pretty tight, but also rather attractive.

He asked "Do you want me to ... keep it on?". I wasn´t really sure how to answer, so I just said "Yeah, I mean, if you want". He nodded and went on about the day normally. That night, I was laying in bed when I thought "Does this technically mean he's a furry". You know, dressing up as an animal and living a fantasy? ( I apologize if i botched the meaning of furry, that's just what I understand). I used to find it weird, but now, I think I like it!

What are your thoughts on it?

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u/Nora_IGuess — 2 months ago