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Can y'all give me some feedback on my first five pages? Current WC: 1st Draft 65k
"A Dragon Prince's Guide to Winning a Hearth Fae" is a cozy baking rivalry romantasy set in the small, sleepy town of Seabloom. These are my first five pages, and I was wondering if there were things I could improve on? This is my first stab at 1st person, present tense, and I'd love some critiques from people who write in either the romance genre or more cozy fantasy authors.
Thank you so very much in advance, and I look forward to reading your feedback!
u/Nordic_Nonsense — 10 hours ago