u/NotSeriousBrBa

My friend's first chap.

My friend's first chap.

This is a chapter my friend wrote, i think he needs to refine his tastes first before writing. Anyway this is like the 4th draft of the first chapter 1 he wrote. I've read it to like 16 chapters and need some fresh perspective as well as him. Dont care if yall belive me. Please gimme a review of you have time to waste reading 3200 words ig

u/NotSeriousBrBa — 5 days ago