

Four pages of the dark fantasy manga, let me know what you think!
So yeah, I was told to come here by someone on
r/DarkArts
and I figured why not? Any constructive criticism is GREATLY appreciated, both on the art style and the narrative. This was drawn traditionally with a cheap mechanical pencil, and I had to take a picture of it with my not so high-end phone to edit it in ibis paint for it to look cleaner, so please cut me some slack on the random specks of blackness on the pictures.