Twist Cubbie playing with a laser pointer
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Twist Cubbie playing with a laser pointer

Art by u/Nuked_Rabbit

This art piece is for a younger version of Twist Cubbie. He still has his regeneration.

u/Odd-Assist-5807 — 21 hours ago

I'm trying to draw 15 year old versions of Chip and one of the kindergarteners. They're generic. I'd like advice for what I can change.

I haven't finished drawing Lilly.

u/Odd-Assist-5807 — 3 days ago

Designs for Twist Riley and Twist Kevin

Twist Kevin Design: u/DALM_RL

Twist Riley Design: u/Whole-Training5220

Twist Riley:

  • 39 years old
  • Friends with Twist Lizzy
  • Twist Edward's cousin

Twist Kevin:

  • 20 years old
  • Twist Lizzy's brother
  • He can use magic
  • Is dating Twist Ruby
  • Is friends with Twist Bubble, Twist Biscuit, and Twist Edward
  • Doesn't kill students
u/Odd-Assist-5807 — 5 days ago

FPE Twist AU: Episode 1 Script (Read Body Text)

This is the script for the Twist AU. I wanted to know if the script was good. Please tell me your critiques.

*Bubble and Biscuit walk towards the school. *

Biscuit: Bubble, we should not go to this school.

Bubble: It’s okay. Kevin promised that Mrs. Lizzy and Miss Ruby wouldn’t kill you.

*Biscuit and Bubble enter the school. They see other students. Edward notices Biscuit and immediately hugs him. *

*Biscuit smiles when he sees his friend and hugs back and both of them blush. *

Edward: Bubble, we purchased a gift. *Zip shows off a bunny and gives them to Bubble. * Can you give this to Biscuit’s mom?

Bubble: Alright.

Edward: Can you tell Lana to not keep Engel in Kindergarten?

Bubble: Why?

Edward: Cubbie is going to the school.

Bubble: Can we tell Miss Anova about Cubbie?

Edward: No. Mrs. Lizzy only wanted Engel to survive.

*Biscuit is pushed to the floor. Lana and Abbie stand over him. Bubble helps Biscuit up. *

Bubble (Angry): Why did you do that?

Abbie (Smugly): Mrs. Lizzy said we could bully Biscuit since he hung out with Kevin.

*Lana and Abbie walk away. *

*Bubble and Edward go with Biscuit to Lizzy’s class. * 

*We see the teacher’s lounge. Mrs. Lizzy and Mrs. Petunia are talking, but Kevin walks towards them. *

Mister Kevin: Lizzy, Biscuit is going to be going to this school. Can you spare him?

*Lizzy becomes extremely upset when she hears Biscuit’s name. *

Mrs. Lizzy: No.

*She goes to her classroom with Mrs. Petunia. *

*Bubble and Edward make sure to sit next to Biscuit and Biscuit looks away from Lizzy. Chip and Zip sit at the same table. Edward walks towards Mrs. Lizzy and Mrs. Petunia. *

Edward: Ms. Lizzy.

Lizzy (Annoyed): Yes, Edward.

Edward: Abbie and Lana pushed Biscuit. Can you ask them to stop?

*Lizzy becomes happy when she hears that Biscuit got hurt. *

Mrs. Lizzy (Happy): No.

Edward (Disappointed): Can I talk to Mrs. Petunia after class?

Mrs. Petunia: Sure.

*We move back to the table. *

Zip: Are you okay?

Biscuit: I’m okay.

Zip: Why didn’t you talk to us?

Biscuit: I was on a family vacation.

*Biscuit takes out a bag of cookies. He gives them to Edward. *

Zip: What did you do while you and your parents vacationed?

Biscuit: I tried baking.

*Bubble gives the bunny to Biscuit. He pets it. *

Zip: I purchased a bunny. I wanted to make your mom feel better.

*Dialogue with Zip, Chip, Biscuit, Bubble, and Edward should be here. *

*Bubble moves to Lana and Abbie’s table. *

Bubble: Lana, can you not have Engel be in kindergarten class?

Lana: Why?

Bubble: Cubbie is going to be in the school.

*Lana becomes a little distressed. *

Lana (Reluctantly): Okay.

*Mrs. Lizzy and Mrs. Petunia are standing at the desk in the classroom. *

Mrs. Lizzy: Hello. Today, we’ll be having a practice test. You have 30 minutes. 

*The other students go through their tests. Zip struggles to answer the questions. After 30 minutes, the class turns in their tests. *

*She grades the paper, but sees that Zip got a B. She grabs a pen and writes over Zip’s paper. Mrs. Petunia turns into Mrs. Lizzy’s Goniometer. *

Mrs. Lizzy: Zip, please stay after class.

*The rest of the class exits the classroom. Zip is extremely scared. *

Mrs. Lizzy: Zip, you failed.

*Mrs. Lizzy uses her weapon to destroy the desk. Zip runs away. Lizzy is overjoyed to chase Zip. Zip starts flying using her wings *

*They end up passing through one of the classrooms. Edward notices, but Biscuit stops him from chasing after them. *

*Zip is cornered against a room. Mrs. Lizzy tears the test in half. Zip shoots a stream of fire, but Mrs. Lizzy isn’t damaged by it. *

*Zip stops using her fire breath and Mrs. Lizzy raises her Goniometer arm. *

*Zip is stabbed through the head and then hit by the Goniometer. Mrs. Lizzy raises Zip and bites Zip, tearing out her organs and killing her. *

u/Odd-Assist-5807 — 8 days ago

You should check the kindergarten room (FPE Twist AU: CubbiΞ Reference sheet)

Art by u/Nuked_Rabbit

"I found another reference sheet."

u/Odd-Assist-5807 — 9 days ago

FPE Twist AU: Miss Anova (Designed by u/Whole-Training5220)

Art by: u/Whole-Training5220

Notes:

She is the kindergarten teacher and the art teacher.

Age: 29

Dislikes: Mrs. Petunia, Mrs. Lizzy, Miss Ruby

She is friends with Mister Skell

u/Odd-Assist-5807 — 11 days ago

Leukemia (FPE Twist AU) (TW: Loud Noises)

Art and Biscuit VA: u/Nuked_Rabbit

Art: u/Whole-Training5220

I will be trying to make a few more short videos for the Twist AU.

u/Odd-Assist-5807 — 11 days ago

FPE Twist AU Cubbie Art (TW: G*re)

When I posted some of my art on older websites, it caused the image to change colors. I think that it actually makes the image look creepier. I'll post the altered image in the comments if someone asks.

u/Odd-Assist-5807 — 13 days ago

FPE Twist AU Facts Part 2 (TW: Descriptions of G*re and inf*nt mur*er)

Art by u/Nuked_Rabbit

Facts

  • Twist Biscuit was friends with twist Kevin. However, Twist Lizzy got mad. She broke into Twist Biscuit's home and tortured Biscuit's newborn brother to death.
  • Twist Biscuit's parents went on vacation, and Twist Bubble also went with them.
  • Twist Cubbie's abilities are not genetic.
  • Twist Biscuit doesn't want others to be upset.
  • Twist Lizzy annoys Twist Edward. She bullies him.
  • Twist Abbie is Twist Lizzy's favorite student
  • Twist Riley is twice removed.
  • Twist Cubbie likes Twist Agetha and Twist Miller.
  • Twist Cubbie does not dislike the people he kills.
u/Odd-Assist-5807 — 18 days ago