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A Gentle, Morbid Lullaby from Underneath my Bed ONLY page 1

LOGLINE: Secluded in an idyllic underground utopia, 20 self-nominated, 'morally perfect' people can finally live out their lives unburdened by the rest of the world, but... One harmless, victimless accident ignites a spiral of hatred, blame, and depravity.

Does this first page make you want to read more? Does it confuse you in a bad way or just make you ask questions?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Qsd8V7_l__NkkaQbK3nBrWtw-TUUGLRY/view?usp=sharing

I dunno, seems like just maybe there's a simpler option...