u/Piggysoris

I have been writing for quite a while now but I am not at the level that I want to be at, so I continue writing to improve. I ask if you guys can let me know what I can do to improve.

Here is a YouTube link to my newest song:

https://youtu.be/2lKb5lbN6qI?si=EvmPFwn2-W9KR4TI

Score:

https://acrobat.adobe.com/id/urn:aaid:sc:VA6C2:735d237d-217c-4798-9f3e-0a6096aeb915