u/Pine_Weasel

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Looking for beta readers/feedback on my attempt at a novella, currently about 75% done with the first draft. For fans of dense, bleak, systems centered literary fiction.

u/Pine_Weasel — 1 day ago
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Looking for general feedback on a first draft of the first chapter of a story i'm writing. Literary fiction.

Any/all feedback appreciated. Thank you!

u/Pine_Weasel — 5 days ago

Basilisk Ch 1 + 2

I know it's too dense and potentially pretentious to read. I would still like criticism and feedback of any kind! Thanks!

u/Pine_Weasel — 13 days ago

looking for feedback. opening paragraph.

Writing a 20-30k word short book about a man who avoids everything. Mostly looking for opinions on prose/density. Thanks!

u/Pine_Weasel — 14 days ago