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Looking for beta readers/feedback on my attempt at a novella, currently about 75% done with the first draft. For fans of dense, bleak, systems centered literary fiction.
u/Pine_Weasel — 1 day ago


Looking for beta readers/feedback on my attempt at a novella, currently about 75% done with the first draft. For fans of dense, bleak, systems centered literary fiction.
Any/all feedback appreciated. Thank you!
I've been posting draft excerpts from a short book i'm writing, this is one of the 'funny' sections. Feedback appreciated!
I know it's too dense and potentially pretentious to read. I would still like criticism and feedback of any kind! Thanks!
Writing a 20-30k word short book about a man who avoids everything. Mostly looking for opinions on prose/density. Thanks!