u/PinkAngel21Bby

Hi! I’m looking for a few beta readers for my completed novel, UnVeiled. (111K words)

UnVeiled follows Kiyani, a woman who escapes an arranged marriage and a lifetime of religious control to rebuild her life through fashion design in Los Angeles. As she reclaims her identity, she finds herself drawn to a man who challenges everything she’s been taught about love—but the past isn’t ready to let her go.

The manuscript was written by me and has been AI-assisted during the editing and revision process, and I’m looking for honest feedback on:

pacing
emotional impact
character development
romance
areas that feel slow or confusing