
ASO Feedback Request: Looking for honest critiques on my screenshots hierarchy and subtitle for US App Store
Hi r/AppStoreOptimization!
I recently launched CocoCut (https://cococut.app), an iOS app that helps people capture 1-second daily clips and automatically stitches them into a mini vlog without manual editing.
I'm currently trying to optimize our US App Store product page conversion rate (CRO) and would love some blunt feedback from this community.
Current Metadata Setup:
- Title: CocoCut - 1s Vlog Diary
- Subtitle: Daily Video Diary, No Edits
- Primary Category: Lifestyle
- Screenshot Structure:
- One second at a time (Lifestyle value hook)
- Tap once. Capture one second. (Core interaction)
- Clips stitch themselves (Automation feature)
- Stickers, captions & film looks (In-camera aesthetic)
- Ready to share in one tap (Export)
🔍 Questions I'd love your take on:
- First 3 Screenshots: Do they communicate the value proposition fast enough, or does the text above the phone mockup get lost?
- Subtitle Keywords: Does "Daily Video Diary, No Edits" sound natural and high-intent, or should I lean more towards "1-Second Video Journal / Mini Vlog"?
- Contrast & Framing: Does the soft gradient background work, or should the device frame and text have stronger contrast?
Appreciate any harsh critiques or suggestions to improve conversion!