Hey, how is my script so far?
Posted here like a week ago but im back with an updated script.
Would love some suggestions on how to work on this, im going for a short story about acceptance of grief. Is this alright so far?
(script - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gQv\_SvwB6r1wiFPiRfPARSCfSGnK7mJb/view?usp=drivesdk)