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Second Feedback on another part!

Soo, this is another part of my book, and this is more of my other Character, Blurley! I have another for Clowson that I will post another day or when I can. Just need some feedback on everything honestly. Lol-

Thougth, one question I have is, if I write my book with no editing (I'll still edit it and double check, but still-), and finish it, can I get someone to help edit some parts like grammar, maybe add or remove some sentences that are or aren't needed? Because if that is possible, then maybe that could make my work easier. 😅

This is for later thougth, not for now. Buuut yeah! 🫪

u/Professional-Sale180 — 3 days ago
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Feedback on a part of my book

Soo, this is one part of the story I'm making. And I would like some feedback on this part. It is random cuz I'm writing different parts like the end first, the start second, etc etc.

But I think I would like some feedback if its well written or on anything and maybe some support. Or some ideas would also help. And If you want more info, I would be happy to tell you the main plot of the story. :]

u/Professional-Sale180 — 6 days ago
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Question and Hello! 🫪

Soo, I been thinking of posting here to get some advice or smth.

But is this a place to share my ideas? Or post some parts of my story to get advice on?

Because I'm planning to post here to get some advice while writing my book, maybe both books-

One is like a computer and human story and a mix of liminal space and other cores, nothing romantic thougth, I mean, it could have, but they would both be Asexual.

the other one is like a mix of TADC and Containment Zero smth(Webtoon), but I think it has more of my ideas, and it also has Liminal space and other cores in the story.

(I love Liminal Space and other cores. Dreamcore, etc.)

But uh, Yeaah. Also, Hello to everyone! I'm new to this community(?) Of writers! I mean, I been writing for a bit. I started I think in November or October. I even made a book which I'm proud honestly, since its one of my first books that is big, and that I completed! :D

But yeah, Helloo! 👋 :D

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u/Professional-Sale180 — 8 days ago