u/PuzzleheadedCan3433

I am a relatively new dm looking for someone who is willing to go over my material. I've got a significant chunk of an adventure planned out but think it could be improved.

EDIT: Forgot to mention it's on roll20 so it's easy to go over online.

I am a new DM creating a homebrew setting. I have the first session mostly planned out, However, since I'm new to this DMing thing and D&D as a whole I was hoping I could get help from a more experienced dm who would go over the material I've got so far so that my first session is a success. Its on roll20 so it'd be easy to show and go over.