u/Remarkable_Key_4224

The art quality in the latest episode was phenomenal?! This is what I meant when I said 1 to 1 manga to anime. This is 1 to 1 if not better. Maybe because of Kirito.

I'm looking for honest critiques of my book. I'm a first time writer that's been carrying a story for a long time that I finally got down on paper. I would very much appreciate any feedback.

The book is about a child who was abandoned by their father for trying to help a woman dieing on their front lawn. The two major things I wanted to accomplish with the writing was not revealing the main characters gender and keeping it purely in their perspective.

Please help.