Reworked my RR story, seeing if this better
Good morning all. About a week ago I had made a post of whether my story was good enough for RR and I listened to a lot of feedback and despite my efforts I lacked a lot of things. I might still but wanted to see if this is a huge improvement, went from a 1 paragraph blurb to what it is now. Story synopsis, what this story is, its connection to a table top role playing game (which I also invented and wrote) and even a brief list of the main cast.
I went from no cover to....against my own principles to the cover that is there now but I wasn't looking at it under the lense of it is a temporary cover. I support human made artwork and human writing, that has not changed and when this is a published book it will have a human made cover.
Here is the link. I'm open to see what everyone thinks so far, chapters will drop 1 per day at noon MST. I am still working on a swap shout out. I need to do a lot swaps with authors more but I am juggling a lot currently in my personal life. Again, thank you reddit community.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/176019/wandering-dark-wind-chronicles-of-theza