





I don't know what to fix
Hi everyone. I wanted to try painting the reference in pic 6 with triads. I tested my warm primaries (deep vermilion/crimson lake, ultramarine, middle chrome) vs my cool ones (cyan, magenta, zinc yellow). The pictures are my most recent attempts to the oldest. I also used sap green and/or burnt umber in pictures 2 and 3.
I like the warm glow in my latest attempt, but there's something missing and I can't figure out what's wrong with it. I'm not aiming to replicate the reference 100 percent, but I don't really know what I want the finished painting to look like. I just want it to look like it makes sense.
Should I use darker washes for the background? Or maybe pile on some more layers, or try other colours? I'd really appreciate some pointers on what feels off, or what I need to focus on improving.