u/SometimesImnaked

Can you "fulfill a right"?

Upfront: This is for poetry so it doesn't have to be formally correct, it's enough to be understood.

Could you say something like "Can you fulfill my right to x" (as in: my right to live in dignity; to be remembered; to have a shelter; whatever).

Does it make more sense to say "Can you fulfill my wish to [be remembered etc]"?

Thanks! :)

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u/SometimesImnaked — 1 day ago

"It's barely you"

Hey! Does this sentence make any sense to you? It should work in a poem, in a "It's almost not you anymore" kind of sense. Or is there any word the would work better than barely?

Thanks!

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u/SometimesImnaked — 12 days ago