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The Evolution of the Concept of Arka – From Its Origins to the Moon

A brief introductory section. After posting the previous analysis dedicated to the Kikakusho and the original narrative framework that can be inferred from it – by the way, thanks to everyone who read it –, I could do nothing but delve further into that fluid stream of ideas that was Evangelion’s pre-production. I mean, I was already in it, and as a great fan that I am (of this work and of Japanese animation in general), it could hardly have been otherwise. In this particular case, my attention turned to the pre-production materials attributable to Iso Mitsuo, collected in “ ” Animation Works: Preproduction, the link to which was provided to me in the comments of my previous analysis by @Zanzor_BM. I would also like to thank everyone who, over the years, has spent time and resources translating all this wealth of material (which I will use as supplementary material), Reichu and the other collaborators mentioned by him at the beginning of the article, felineki and Nigouki.

Iso was evidently a very important figure during pre-production, having contributed to the development of numerous concepts, ideas, memos of all kinds (and, last but not least, he was also the designer of Lilith). The subject of this first analysis will be the mysterious place “Arka”, and how it evolved throughout these streams of ideas (presumably dating back to 1993-1994). Finally, I believe these analyses will take the form of a trilogy, which is why some mysteries may gradually be unveiled over the course of them.

(The order of the images in the gallery reflects the order in which these documents were discussed.)

Arka as a physical location

Let us begin with the first reference source available to us in chronological order, namely the Proposal. Within the project document, “Arka” is mentioned for the first time in episode 25, the penultimate episode, and in the title it is marked by a very specific designation, Yakusoku no Chi (約束の地), that is, the “promised land”. Below is the synopsis contained in the proposal for episode 25:

>The Laboratory houses the ancient ruins "Arka", which constitute its key.

>The UN leadership decides to abandon the "Human Instrumentality Project" and destroy the laboratory in order to stop the 12th Apostle.

>The father opposes this.

>Shinji and the others remain in the research center for Rei's sake.

>The drama of people clashing over different goals.

As it is presented, the information provided to us seems to strongly suggest that Arka is a physical, tangible place: the fact that the laboratory houses it, probably in a very deep underground section, that it is built above it (as will later be the case with the Black Moon in the final version) and serves as a shield for it, but above all the designation of “Promised Land”, which by its very nature inevitably evokes a physical place, towards which – perhaps, considering its biblical connotation – one might return.

In accordance with this first interpretation, my hypothesis followed that these ruins represented the remains of an ancient city dating back to the First Ancestral Race, coherently with the science-fiction framework that the proposal embraced (in particular Hogan’s Giants Series ). On the other hand, these ruins are also defined as “the keys” to the laboratory situated above them, suggesting to us that they were not a passive element but rather an active one within the narrative. From this, we can imagine how such a place was very likely designated as an “important revelation”, around which the originally conceived ending of Evangelion would have revolved.

On the basis of all this, we can suppose that Arka was primarily conceived as a physical location, although at the present state of things we cannot be certain of this with a good degree of probability, having (re)considered only the kikakusho.

Rei and the Nature of Arka

Moving on to the examination of the next source, we have Iso’s idea memos dedicated to the character of Ayanami Rei (p. 138 A, B, C).

On page 138 A, titled “綾波レイ [アイデアメモ] 案1.0”, the following sequence of events is proposed: Gendō fails Yui’s Instrumentality experiment > despite the failure, he manages to extract her cells, which are still alive, and cultivates them > however, this subsequent attempt at cloning also fails. Desperate, he leaves Arka (taking the card with him). Three years later, he returns there and, to his surprise, finds a three-year-old girl: Rei. Hoping to create more clones of Rei, he tried again and again, but each attempt failed. Only imperfect copies were produced. "Why only this child...?"

It is interesting, first of all, to wonder what differentiates the procedures to which Yui is subjected, since Iso uses two different terms in the memo: ユイの補完 (hokan, the same term used in 人類補完計画) and ユイのクローン (the phonetic transliteration of the term clone). My personal hypothesis is that the former may be a process similar to the one carried out in episode 20 to recover Shinji from his molecular state (that is, materially reconstructing his molecular structure – and therefore the original –, before attempting to create a copy).

Gendō leaves Arka (the memo specifically states that he takes the “card” with him, meaning his identification card), thus implicitly confirming with a high degree of probability that it is a physical place, where there must also be research personnel capable of carrying out experiments (because the experiments he conducted on his wife were performed precisely there, at Arka). But it is also the place where, after three years of absence, he finds a little Rei… Gendō tries to clone her but cannot: this is significant because it proves that Rei is, in every respect, a "biological exception". The mystery, then, seems to revolve around the question: how did that girl, whom Gendō cannot replicate, come to exist in the first place?

The strangest, and also the most uncertain part of the memo due to the way it is written, is where “孔子暗黒” is mentioned, which appears to be a reference to Kōshi Ankokuden by Daijirō Morohoshi. Something along the lines of “アルカの肉をたべて” can apparently be made out, which would be “eating the flesh of Arka” (?). The 〜みたいな can help us in this context, because it means “something like”, “something similar to”, etc. So, in my opinion, Iso is not literally describing the action of someone eating flesh (who the subject is, is unknown anyway, since it is omitted), but is probably noting down an image to use as a reference.

In memo 138 C, titled “第伍話「レイ、心のむこうに」レイの部屋・虹に関して [アイデアメモ] (2)” and explicitly addressed to Anno, Iso provides further information concerning Rei’s background.

>Rei grew up in a Terminal located far below Central Dogma. (approximately from ages 0 to 3)
Arka as mother, Gendō as father.

>In «The Cat and the Transfer Student», a blood-covered boy makes his way to the Terminal. At his feet there is something that reminds Rei of [an old?/dear?] toy — (that smells absolutely awful~).
In the background, the Essene symbol.

>Rei keeps the same toy very carefully in her room. It would be better to show it as early as episode 5.

>What could it be?

>Image: in the dark and eerily cold Terminal, the traces of the life Rei led remain.

>Yui’s Instrumentality and the generation of Eva-00 are both carried out in this Terminal.

You can imagine my astonishment upon reading this memo: Arka as mother, Gendō as father (アルカを母、ゲンドウを父として)? In this note, Iso proposes the possibility that Rei is literally conceived as the daughter of Gendō and Arka. The latter is no longer merely the place where Rei is found, but also becomes the place where she herself originated. This would also much better explain why the girl is a biological exception whom Gendō cannot replicate: he can attempt to reproduce Rei, but he does not possess the “mother” that generated her. The description of Rei that emerges from these two memos is that of a girl who belongs to Arka, born and raised there; she keeps an object from that place in her room, and the Terminal preserves traces of the life she lived there.

As for Arka as a location, we have another addition: mention is made of a Terminal situated very far below Central Dogma. There is no note explicitly stating that Arka and this Terminal are the same place; however, if we consider the consequential nature of the documents, as well as the fact that the memo states that Yui’s experiments and the generation of Eva-00 took place there, we can consider the two locations to be closely related. Or, even better: that this extremely deep Terminal itself houses the ruins and research laboratories.

Last but not least, the presence of the Essene symbol is also mentioned (the proto SEELE), thus establishing a connection between the ruins and the Essene heritage, which in turn connects back to the Dead Sea Scrolls.

What struck me the most was seeing the concept of motherhood associated with Arka. This could support my idea that the various concepts associated with Arka were, in hindsight, transferred onto the figure of Lilith: because, just think about it for a moment, Lilith is the mother of life, together with her primordial soup, and in this stage of pre-production we discover that the concept of motherhood had also been associated with Arka (it would have generated Rei). Let us remember how the GeoFront in the final version was subsequently built upon the Black Moon, that is, the ark with which the Second Apostle arrived on Earth, as well as how the creature’s design was conceived precisely by Mitsuo Iso… Naturally, these are all my own suppositions, but there is a common thread.

The Cat and the Transfer Student

As a third source, let us consider memos 159 C and D, which concern the storyboards for episode 22 entitled “The Cat and the Transfer Student” (「猫と転校生」), in which the Apostle who would later become Kaworu/Tabris appears. Before proceeding, however, a clarification is necessary: the aforementioned memos, whose respective titles are 第22話 「猫と転校生」 [ストーリーボード] (8) and 第22話 「猫と転校生」 「ストーリーボード] (9)、第拾参話 「使徒、侵入」 [設定参考]、 ターミナルドグマ [イメージボード], even though they are explicitly listed as storyboards for ep.22, may in fact not be. Let me explain: the storyboards for ep.22 would appear to be divided into nine parts, of which the eighth and ninth cited above would appear to be the last two, but when comparing the synopses it can clearly be understood that they do not match. The first seven parts all follow on from one another and perfectly support an autonomous narrative structure. The last two, on the other hand, show a different development of the story. There is an explanation and it would appear to be found in the textual data: shortly below 第22話 「猫と転校生」 [ストーリーボード] (8), we also find this: EVA20 シノプシス 4.23. In essence, these two synopses constituted part of the material originally produced for episode 20 and were subsequently reused/redistributed as material for episode 22. All of this is to explain how the sources I have considered in this instance are one of the many narrative developments relating to ep.22.

The first synopsis, briefly put, recounts Rei’s progressive discovery of her non-human origin and her connection to Arka and the Moon. The girl has an unsettling dream: she crosses a sea of mud carrying on her shoulders a person covered in blood, who is identified as Yui. Exhausted, she falls. Gendo appears with his left eye empty and bleeding. Rei herself begins to become covered in blood and upon waking she notices that only her hands are slightly bleeding: she therefore understands that her body is beginning to die.

Ritsuko warns Rei that she can no longer help her; she thanks her, as if she has now accepted her own death (this passage is very interesting, because it depicts a completely different relationship between the characters of Rei and Ritsuko from the one we will later see in the final version). At school Rei encounters the transfer student who immediately identifies himself as an Apostle; he declares that he knows she will die soon and that he has come to “receive” her. Only Rei can see him, while the others perceive him as some sort of spirit. The two then begin a short journey through the old districts that existed before the construction of Tokyo. The Apostle explains to her that human beings are made of “earth”, but that her earth is different from that of the other human beings and that it is the same one of which he is made. The Apostle finally reveals his nature: he is a messenger of the Moon and an emissary of Arka, who has come to take Rei back.

The two reach Central Dogma using Rei’s ID, entering Terminal Dogma. Eva 05 opposes them; the Apostle confronts it using telekinesis but is seriously injured. Rei proactively chooses to protect the Apostle and finally manages to defeat the unit. The two then proceed through a vacuum area and reach the Terminal, approaching the heart of the mystery of Arka.

In the subsequent synopsis, which picks up from the conclusion of the previous one, the two reach a door on which the symbol of the Essenes is engraved: at this point Rei regains her memory and recognizes the place as the one where she was raised and born (the one mentioned in the memos dedicated to her).

>Rei: Now I remember. I was raised here. I was born here.
Apostle : You are a child of Arka. Shall we get you there?
The Apostle encourages Rei onward.
Rei: We can’t go any further than this.
The Apostle walks into the vacuum area, his body shining beautifully.
Apostle : But we can. Our bodies are protected by holy light.
He leads her by the hand. Rei’s body takes on a beautiful light as well.

The Apostle enters into communication with the luminous Arka, while Asuka, who has arrived, strikes him. Asuka’s Eva snipes the Apostle . A cavity opens up, leaving Terminal Dogma fully exposed. Through the center of the hole, the full moon hangs in the sky. Rei’s heart stops and she is rescued, though in a vegetative state.

Yet Rei seems to awaken; an EVA beam from below and Rei seems to bid farewell to the Earth ("Goodbye...to the moon...") and determined to reach the Moon ("To the moon!!").

>「さようなら・・・月へ・・・・」

>下からEVAのビーム‼

>「月へ‼」

>レイ

The final sequence of events is not very clear, but the レイ placed at the end of all the dialogue at the end almost seems like a caption for the subject of the scene, as if to say that she is the protagonist of it; I therefore lean toward interpreting that the agent is her.

This passage, in my opinion, is important for several reasons: the first is that the narrative of these synopses seems to consistently refer to Arka as a place located enclosed in the depths beneath Terminal Dogma, thus placing itself in conceptual continuity with the memos dedicated to the character of Rei. The second is because the non-human nature of her character is revealed, which we discover to be made of the same earth as the Apostles (and therefore she herself can be considered one), and finally a significant connection is established between the latter and the Moon, as certified by the ending where Rei seems to be heading toward the Moon, perhaps with the intention of finally clarifying her origins. This connection woven with the Moon is important, because we will later see that it will be further reworked and developed.

Within the memo, a visual construction of the place that is the subject of the narrative is also listed (the relevant photo 159 D can be seen): at the top the Moon is indicated, below we find Terminal Dogma, which we discover is actually a base for lunar rockets, then Central Dogma (thus appearing inverted); roughly in that area the site of the explosion and the battle that has just ended is indicated. Given this visual representation, we can suppose that Arka is located even further below, as said enclosed within the bowels.

The scene as it is described also appears very spectacular, with a deliberately surreal image: the starry sky appears toward the bottom, because the perspective of the entire complex seems to invert itself like an elevator, with up and down switching places.

It is interesting that the detail that there is an “Arka substance” is also mentioned, that is, a muddy substance associated with it, which appears to corrode or cover the structure (アルカ物質に侵されている。泥のようなもので一層おおわれる).

Regarding the Moon as a destination, one could also advance the hypothesis that the latter too preserves vestiges of the First Ancestral Race, exactly like Arka on Earth. On the other hand, if they left them on Earth, why would they not have left them on its satellite as well? As in The Sentinel and 2001, here too the Moon would become the repository of a non-human past and superior knowledge. After all, the latter now seems to have been fully incorporated into the narrative, as well as being connected in some way to the Apostles themselves (many of whom, why not, could have originated precisely from there).

The Process of Cosmologization

The last source taken into consideration is memo 139 A, titled “月のモチーフ [アイデアメモ](1)”. This memo represents a fundamental step in the development of the concept of Arka, but I would dare say also for the entire cosmology of Evangelion. It is worth clarifying this from the outset: in this memo the concept of Arka evolves further, and numerous ideas/plotline suggestions are introduced, some of which would then survive in the further reworkings of the block of the final episodes. And since this is something so important, I will leave the entire text below:

>Would it be better to show the Moon‼ more explicitly? I agree with the idea that, after all, Arka is the Moon‼

>It might be a good idea that, during the Giant Impact, Arka, which was originally on Earth, was separated together with the Moon and the Earth. Or, that what came flying during the Giant Impact was precisely Arka.

>Or again, that until the moment of its arrival it was simply ordinary matter, but that, by mixing with the earth of the Earth — or, conversely, by failing to mix with it and repelling each other — it brought life to the surface. Life itself is contradiction: this is my theory. It is the physical contradiction itself that opposes heat and the second law [of thermodynamics]. Life dreams of stability and desires contradiction.

>It is still all undecided how to distribute the Adama of the Moon and the Adama of the Earth among Adam, Rei, humanity, the Apostles and the others. Rei will be the Adama of the Moon, I suppose. Could clones be obtained from the Adama of the Earth? — When her first menstruation arrives, Rei vomits blood and dies. (The Moon comes to take her back.)

>There is a theory according to which the influence exerted by the movements of the Moon on the Earth gave rise to terrestrial life. A theory born, for example, from the observation that several living organisms synchronize their cycles with the ebb and flow of the tides. Or the fact that werewolves, menstruation, the laying of eggs by marine organisms and similar phenomena are associated with high tides (full moon).

On this page, which almost seems to be characterized by a revelatory nature for the author who wrote it, Iso evolves the concept of Arka and merges it with the Moon through a substantial equivalence: Arka is the Moon itself (やはり、アルカは月‼). Since Rei was the daughter of Arka, with this evolution, Rei also becomes, by extension, the daughter of the Moon. Our satellite is personified, becoming Rei’s cosmic mother. After that, Iso proposes two theories about the birth of Arka:

Hypothesis A: ジャイアントインパクトで、もともと地球にあったアルカが、月と地球に分断した。

That is, during the Giant Impact, Arka, which was originally located on Earth, divided/separated into Moon and Earth.

Hypothesis B: と、いうのもいいですが ジャイアントインパクトでとんできたものがアルカであった。Or, what came flying during the Giant Impact was Arka (and therefore a celestial body/object coming from space).

It should be said that the term “Giant Impact” really exists, referring in real cosmology to the hypothesis of the enormous collision that would have led to the formation of the Moon; Iso therefore seems to be playing precisely with this event. Regardless of which theory one prefers, what Iso is trying to do here is give Arka a cosmological origin.

In the following paragraph the focus shifts to the theme of life. Iso here proposes a pseudo-philosophical metaphor for the birth of life characterized by his personal vision as an author: in accordance with the fact that, for the latter, life itself is contradiction (矛盾そのものが生命である), life is born when two incompatible principles are brought into relation (mixing or non-mixing of the materials, depending on the hypothesis).

The paragraph immediately following is simply pure madness: the concepts of Adama of the Moon (月のアダマ) and Adama of the Earth (地球のアダマ) are introduced, and it is written that, with regard to the latter, the appropriate distribution among all the other characters/factions involved still has to be carried out (Adam, Rei, humanity itself and the Apostles). Then it is added: Rei will be the Adama of the Moon, I suppose (レイは月のアダマなんでしょう). Then, besides wondering whether clones could eventually be obtained from the Adama of the Earth, it is written: when her first menstruation arrives, Rei spits out blood and dies (月経をむかえた時、レイは血をふき出して死ぬ) and, in parentheses, that the Moon will come to take her back (月からのお迎え).

When the distinction between the two Adama is introduced, Iso is perhaps taking the first steps toward an expansion of the cosmogonic entities of the universe of Evangelion, and it could be interpreted as an even more significant step if we think of it in terms of the definitive duality that the series would later distinguish itself by (Adam and Lilith; White Moon and Black Moon; Apostles and Lilin as different evolutionary lines and so on). It is curious to note a terminological variation: attention, these beings who are named here for the first time are called アダ and not アダ like the First Apostle, thus the final syllable changes.

The assumptions and observations that can be made are manifold. One might think, at first glance, that the “Adama” may perhaps designate a category within which different entities are assimilable but united by the same origin or nature. Or, one could understand it exactly as it is written, that is, we have two unique entities: one represents the Moon and the other represents the Earth (and probably, in the absence of other information, this is to be regarded as the most correct interpretation). What is certain, however, is that at this point in the development the concept of a single and univocal entity designated by this name (that is, the Sentinel, the First Apostle) had been abandoned and it had been decided to expand the concept, introducing further ones. Put more simply: Adam no longer refers to a single entity but multiple entities that seem to bear this designation are introduced. Another interesting point would be to understand how to relate these entities to each other, that is, how do we relate the lunar and terrestrial Adama with the First Apostle called Adam? Because when Iso mentions that these two entities still have to find a definitive placement (even though he almost certainly candidly proposes Rei as the Adama of the Moon) the First Apostle is mentioned in the list. Perhaps it is to be understood as a replacement at his expense, or perhaps there would have been three entities that could really have coexisted in a hypothetical final version of Evangelion…

There is one last interesting thing relating to the discourse on the Adams. Remember how four Adams appear in Rebuild?

Which, by the way, I only just realized, the visual representation draws heavily from the God Warriors marching in Nausicaä.... Oh well...

Bear in mind, I am not arguing that the concept implemented in Rebuild of the four Adams could have been recycled from this idea that appeared in the memo under examination, since these remain mere suppositions without any basis. However, it is very interesting to note – and this is a factual point – how this memo demonstrates that the introduction of multiple beings/entities called Adam had already passed through the minds of those involved during the same pre-production of the original 1995 television series.

As for the attribution of the status of Adama of the Moon to Rei, the girl’s non-human origins are made explicit in a very clear way, and not only as a clone but also by virtue of an extraterrestrial origin. Menarche, and therefore puberty, becomes the moment in which her lunar nature manifests itself. As a consequence, the Moon claims her for itself. All those who at this point thought of the tale of Kaguya hime in Taketori Monogatari have hit the mark.

The Abandonment

I chose this order of presentation because from a logical point of view I consider it the most valid. Attention: this is not the actual chronological order in which the development took place, since we do not know the dates. As such, the margin of error remains rather high, but, as stated, reasoning on the basis of the data in our possession, it is the one that I find most sensible from a logical point of view. I think the material born as ep.20 and then channeled into 22 predates the memo on the Moon, given the presence of some inconsistencies: here Arka is still understood as a place, and there is no mention whatsoever of the designation as Adama of the Moon. Furthermore, if we assume that the lines concerning the destination toward the Moon are spoken by her, this would conflict with her being claimed by the satellite, since she would be going there proactively.

At the stage of development concerning ep.22 we can notice how the plot concerning Rei’s non-human nature was about to be resolved, and how the Moon was already considered an integral part of the narrative. In the memo dedicated to the Moon, if we assume it to be later, Iso further evolves the framework, developing a cosmologization: he identifies Arka with the Moon itself (a concept then evidently discarded, perhaps because it was too extreme), introduces the concept of the Adama (identifying Rei as the Adama of the Moon) and further strengthens the connection between the satellite and the latter, providing additional background that gives meaning to the connection and outlining the Kaguya hime concept, with the Moon claiming its daughter back. We cannot prove it, but the narrative dynamic would appear to evolve in this direction. What remains common, instead, to this development flow, regardless of its actual order, is the character of Rei, who is progressively developed more and more.

Finally, as we can learn from this page (memo 160 A), titled “Plot Development Plan for Endgame and Beyond”:

>"On the basis of the Proposal, there would be a battle centered around Arka, the area beyond Central Dogma and treated as a mystery up to this point. Since it’s a relic from ancient times, we sought to create a burgeoning sense of the mythological. While some scenes partially made it in, Arka itself ultimately disappeared from the story. Leaving a few sequences behind, the whole Arka Line got decommissioned.”

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Evangelion's 1993 Project Proposal – A very different vision from the final version

Recently, following yet another rewatch of the television series, I read the Kikakusho (企画書), that is, the original project proposal presented in 1993, in its entirety, trying to analyse it as thoroughly as possible. Based on this, I would like to share the results of my analysis, highlighting the most interesting observations that, in my opinion, can be made, particularly by relying on the terminological evidence, which is far from being coincidental in certain passages. I think this may be interesting because the project proposal presented the image of a work that was profoundly different from the one that ultimately reached television screens and that we would eventually learn to know and love.

The first major consideration concerns precisely the science fiction framework that the work initially appeared to possess: a vast world that was then almost entirely lost in the final version. Although it already contains many of the ideas that would later flow into the final version, the narrative structure is deeply rooted in the great science fiction of the ’70s and ’80s, while also making some of its main sources of inspiration very clear. The triptych composed of Arthur C. Clarke’s “The Sentinel”, the basis for the subsequent “2001: A Space Odyssey”, together with the further reinterpretation of the same work by a different author, James P. Hogan’s “The Giants” series constitute an authentic cultural foundation upon which Hideaki Anno appears to have built his original conception of Evangelion. These are not simply superficial similarities, nor do I consider them banal coincidences: Anno has always been an avid reader of science fiction and we can presume that he almost certainly read Hogan’s “The Giants” series, a series of novels that, moreover, enjoyed considerable success in Japan, being reprinted numerous times. James P. Hogan himself would later participate as a guest of honor at DAICON V held in Suita, in Osaka Prefecture, together with other notable guests such as Harry Harrison and Toren Smith (whose name would later be given as a tribute to a character from Gunbuster, released some years later in ’89). As can be inferred, many of the narrative concepts that appear in the Kikakusho present strong parallels with these works, sometimes almost straightforward ones, indirectly confirming the aforementioned sources of inspiration.

Starting with the First Ancestral Race (第一始祖民族), Dai ichi shiso minzoku. The word 民族 (minzoku) constitutes a very precise terminological choice, evoking a people, a culture, an organized society: we are therefore being suggested that this First Ancestral Race was not a mere alien species, but a genuine ancient civilization. Humanity therefore finds itself confronting the legacy left behind (残す, nokosu) by an unimaginably remote civilization, technologically far superior, which has scattered traces of its existence across the Earth. It is a classic scenario of science fiction archaeology, in which the remote past holds the key to humanity’s future evolution (as in Giants).

The traces left on Earth by this civilization could be none other than the Apostles (with a good degree of certainty), whose original conception is rather different. The Kikakusho describes them as ancient relics (古代遺物 kodai ibutsu), destined to awaken after having remained buried, presumably, for geological ages. Furthermore, they are also defined as 巨大戦闘兵器群 (kyodai sentou heiki gun), literally “a group of gigantic weapons of war”, employing, among other things, a deliberately mechanical and military expression. The image being evoked is that of sophisticated artificial weapon systems rather than living organisms of their own, as they would later become in the final version.

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As for their designation, the Kikakusho is quite precise. The beings threatening humanity are called 使徒, a term which, in the Christian translation of the Bible, refers to the Apostles. In order to make the meaning of the word in kanji completely explicit, it is even accompanied by the phonetic transcription アポストロ (aposutoro) – which appeared only in this particular context –, that is, the katakana transcription of a foreign loanword borrowed from Portuguese. The document subsequently explains that the Apostles bear the name of “Angels”, almost as though it were an honorary designation. Further information is provided on the page specifically dedicated to them, where it is stated that all Apostles are given the name of an Angel according to the Dead Sea Scrolls (『死海文書』の記述による「天使」の名 命名されている). To express this concept, several expressions are used, including the aforementioned 命名されている, which means “to be named”, “to be designated” or “to be baptized”, as well as 冠する (kansuru), a much more elegant verb whose literal meaning is “to wear a crown”; from this derives the idea of bearing a particular name, being invested with it or carrying it as a title. Here too, the Kikakusho retains a decidedly science fictional approach, in which the biblical references function primarily as nomenclature derived from ancient texts.

It is difficult not to notice the striking analogy with Yokoyama Mitsuteru’s Mars. In that work too, humanity is subjected to the judgment of an emissary sent by its creators, who will initially cooperate with humans having lost his memories following his awakening. Throughout the story, the other artefacts left on Earth awaken and become the means through which a superior civilization determines whether humanity deserves to survive or should instead be annihilated.

This is, no more and no less, the very premise of “The Sentinel”. Humanity discovers a mysterious alien artefact on the Moon, protected by an impenetrable energy shield. Only technological progress, particularly mastery of nuclear energy, allows humanity to overcome that barrier, sending, however, at the same time a signal to the creators of the artefact. At that precise moment humanity demonstrates that it has reached a sufficient level of development to be observed and, eventually, judged.

Even this aspect is present in its entirety in the project proposal: it is in fact written that half a century before the events of the story, humanity succeeds in mastering nuclear fusion, symbolically “grasping the Sun in its own hands” (核融合に成功し「太陽」を自らの手中に収めた人類が). Humanity has conquered the very force that powers the Sun, appropriating a power that until then belonged exclusively to nature (or symbolically to the divine). As in The Sentinel, this technological leap marks humanity’s transition into a new phase of history, in which confrontation with its creators becomes inevitable

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Completing this structure we find the First Apostle, that is the Sentinel itself, namely Adam, unearthed by humanity during the “Dead Sea Evaporation Incident”, which occurred in 2000 AD. The verb used in this context is 発掘 (hakkutsu), indicating how the Sentinel is literally brought to light through archaeological excavation. Applying the new technologies derived from this discovery and relying on the scientific knowledge accumulated by humanity, a replica is finally created (the Evangelions, just as in the final version). As for the terminology with which the giant is referred to, it is interesting to observe how it is initially called 人造人間 (artificial human; the same term with which the Evangelions would later be called by Ritsuko in ep.1), and shortly afterwards 生物兵器 (seibutsuheiki), that is, biological weapon.

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The location of the catastrophe here is not Antarctica, but the Dead Sea, confirming that the Scrolls would probably have played a much more significant narrative role in this original version (there, after all, the famous Qumran Manuscripts were discovered, in the area of the same name).

I would say that the picture is sufficiently clear: an ancient civilization, perhaps the progenitor of life on Earth, has left behind a “Sentinel” and its messengers in order to judge the actions of the human race, which has by now reached a scientific and technological level advanced enough to be put to the test (exactly as in Mars). This is also why the terminology with which the enemies are referred to, “使徒”, is all the more appropriate: they are not mere antagonists, but genuine messengers (hence the meaning as Apostles), tasked with determining the fate of the human race. It is very similar to the Nausicaä manga, where the latter too will be designated with the same term, always in the sense of messenger (being the person of the prophecy).

Being bearers of a message is also reflected on the narrative level, which envisaged greater interaction between the characters and these creatures, in turn establishing a progressive dialogue between them. In episode 16, entitled “In the Heart of the Enemy”, Shinji would have been captured by the enemy and would have communicated with the Apostles for the first time, part of whose purposes would have been revealed. It is ironic to think that, in hindsight, the definitive episode 16 would instead mark a further change in tone in the series, strongly shifting towards introspection. To be fair, the concept of “establishing a dialogue” would not be entirely lost: Armisael in ep.23 would be the first to dialogue with a pilot; Leliel was also supposed to do so precisely in ep.16 according to the original script for ep.16, but the idea was discarded because it was probably considered too alienating (it would have employed different languages eventually arriving, through trial and error, at Japanese). In the void, instead, was the idea of launching counter-offensives against the enemies, something that in the television series would happen only in ep.10, with Sandalphon’s embryo discovered in the volcano, destined, however, to remain a unique case.

Continuing along this line, another enormous difference concerns the Human Instrumentality Project, which appears as the great Promethean theme permeating the kikakusho. After having conquered the power of the stars, humanity decides to go even further by artificially creating the Fruit of the Tree of Life (生命の樹の実), with the aim of eliminating death, freeing itself from original sin and rewriting the human condition. Oh yeah; in the proposal version the fruit does not pre-exist but would have been artificially created in a laboratory by human beings. From this we derive the different nuance between the projects: in the final version, the premise from which SEELE starts is existential and psychological: the individual self is the main cause of human suffering, loneliness, fear and the inability to understand one another. The proposed solution is therefore the dissolution of individual boundaries and fusion into a single unified existence. Here, instead, the problem is biological and structural: humanity is limited and mortal, and the proposed solution is therefore to transcend such limitations. It is a vast transhumanist project aimed at the biological evolution of the human species. It comes very close to 2001, with the difference that while in the film humanity’s evolution is guided by the superior civilization, with the birth of the Star Child consequently being a step granted from the outside, here humanity in the world of Evangelion does not wait at all to be guided towards the next stage of evolution, but seeks to construct its own “monolith” inside a laboratory.

The large part of this framework did not survive into the final series, except for a few scattered fragments. Some of them emerge precisely in The End, for example with the concept of an “ark”. At the beginning of theatrical episode 25, Air, when SEELE orders the Self-Defense Forces to storm NERV headquarters, one of its members utters an emblematic phrase: “We will not abandon our human form to board the ark called Eva” 「我らは人の形を捨ててまで、エヴァという名の箱船に乗ることはない」. The term employed is 箱船 whose meaning is understood as Noah’s Ark (cited as an example in the meaning). I do not think this concept appears by chance at all: in fact, episode 25 as described in the proposal would have been called “Arka, the Promised Land”, with the synopsis adding that the laboratory houses the ancient ruins of “Arka”, which constitute its key. It seems evident to me that this line of dialogue spoken by one of SEELE’s members clearly appears to be a surviving fragment of the original narrative framework.

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Now, it would be interesting to speculate as to what this “Arka” was. Because in the title it is defined as “Promised Land” (約束の地 ; Yakusoku no Chi), explicitly recalling that of the Bible, Canaan, the land that God promised to Abraham and his descendants, thus evoking the idea of a physical place rather than a mere object. In accordance with this thesis, one could hypothesize that Arka is the equivalent of the remains of an ancient city belonging to the FAR (consistent with the discoveries of lost civilizations in Hogan’s The Giants series or the Atlantean ruins present in Escaflowne). Furthermore, these ruins constitute the key to the laboratory, which suggests to us that they are not merely a passive site, but presumably the fundamental technology upon which the entire structure for carrying out the plan for the completion of humanity is based. The terminology employed (擁する – yōsuru literally means “to embrace”, “to possess”, “to house within oneself”), indicates to us that the laboratory was built around and above the ruins of Arka, on the other hand we have said that they are its keys. In the transition to the final series, this dual concept was reinterpreted: the ruins of Arka became the Black Moon and the laboratory the GeoFront, built, as we know, inside the cavity left by the impact. The concept of an ark of salvation, on the other hand, would later be associated with the Evangelions themselves, whose first unit in the film’s finale would become, by Yui’s will, the memento of the existence of the human race; in a sense an ark.

Many more things could be mentioned, but for brevity I would like to conclude with a brief mention of some of the characters. The impression I got of Shinji, both from the way he is portrayed and from certain written elements, is that he would almost certainly have been a very different protagonist from the one we eventually came to know. He is described as “calm and a model student”, with a troubled past but not as tormented as the definitive Shinji. The choice to designate an ordinary 14-year-old boy deliberately contrasts with the giant robot trope in which the pilot who boards possesses talent and aptitude from the outset. The age at which the children are placed, adolescence, is chosen precisely because it represents the subtle boundary between being a child and being an adult, and therefore the final moment in which one’s own “self” is formed (providing a pseudo-explanation as to why the Evangelions are piloted precisely by fourteen-year-olds, an element that was never explained in the final series and which Anno himself forgot about). The descriptions of Misato and Ritsuko correspond to their definitive versions; in Asuka there appears the possibility of misandry, an element somewhat lost in the final version. Rei too has an accurate description, being described as a “nihilist without emotions” who “does not know her own feelings”, which she will learn to understand by learning to love a person.

Finally, the “Professor” Gendo Ikari, promoter of the Human Instrumentality Project. What immediately catches the eye is the appellation of 教授 (kyōju), which primarily identifies him as a man of science (perhaps a full professor or a figure nevertheless at the top of scientific research) and thus gives him a title that in the final version will instead belong to Fuyutsuki.

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SEELE does not exist and the character Konrad Lorenz (later Keel) is mentioned, belonging to the United Nations Executive Group and holding the position of supreme head of the NERV control committee. Thus the UN would have been the other major organization alongside NERV, playing a more significant role in the narrative.

Knowing how things turned out, I think nobody can complain. The intention to create something truly innovative, which can already be read between the lines in the proposal, was emphasized even further, thanks to the psychological introspection and experimentalism of the last two episodes. In hindsight we know that Hideaki Anno would project all his turmoil, conflicts and fears into it, perhaps in an attempt to resolve himself through the resolution of his own characters. The rest, as they say, is history. Nevertheless, I admit that I would not have minded at all seeing this original version come to life, even if only out of sheer curiosity to discover what it would have looked like on screen and how it might have evolved. The kikakusho still preserves the moment when ShinSeiki Evangelion turned its gaze towards the stars, the ruins of forgotten civilizations and the question that has permeated the best science fiction for decades: what happens when a species becomes advanced enough to finally attract the attention of its creators?

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u/Substantial-Photo771 — 6 days ago
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Watching Ai Oboete imasu ka? always delights my heart

I had the chance to rewatch this masterpiece for the sixth time, and to pay homage to it, I've written down some of my thoughts that I wanted to post here, on the official Macross subreddit.

This film means a lot to me. It's among my favorite films of all time, and ever since I first watched it in 2023, I get emotional every time I see it. Moreover, the two main songs of the film - 'Ai Oboete Imasu ka' and 'Tenshi no Enogu' - were, and still are, a great source of inspiration for me, as well as a source of inner strength.

I will always be grateful to the staff who worked on this film: they created something unique and unrepeatable in the history of Japanese animation. And to think Kawamori was only 24... I get goosebumps. That’s why I wanted to convey a bit of my love for this film by talking briefly about it.

This film is an immense ode to the most noble feeling that a human being, in my opinion, can experience: love which, in the film, is intrinsically linked to the concept of "culture", being encompassed by it. If there is culture, then there is also love.

The Giants (Zentran and Meltlan), who tear each other apart in a war that has been going on for millennia, have forgotten it but will reclaim it thanks to the starlet of the story, the legendary Minmay. And so, after immeasurable time, even an alien race that had known nothing but war reclaims culture and with it the feeling of love.
It is incredible what Kawamori and his staff managed to create in 1984... The feeling of love elevated to a universal element, of brotherhood and unity among peoples, even of alien races. Which, at a certain point, even decide to rebel against their own patriarch with the awareness that they must preserve this "culture".

And I, a viewer, simply enchanted by this animated marvel - exceptional in all its components -, can do nothing but acknowledge it and be moved.
For me this film is art: I, when faced with art, tend to be moved.

The sequence of the final battle against the Zentradi Patriarch is rightfully in the history of Japanese animation. In it an idol, who rises as the ultimate savior of humanity by singing a pop song that speaks of love.

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A song capable of breaking through to all the soldiers at the front; an alien song popular millennia ago in who knows which alien city. "A very simple love song", as Misa will say to her colleague Claudia.

Minmay becomes the savior muse of the human race, spiritually sacrificing herself for it and promoter of "culture" (otaku).

This film is, as I like to define it, Minmay-centric. After all, "it is a story centered on human drama" as well as, I would add, on the personal growth of its characters. Among these precisely the starlet, who for much of the film is portrayed to us as childish and selfish. But she sets out on the path to adulthood when, faced with something that only she can do, she takes on her responsibilities and sings for the salvation of the earth. The sad romantic disappointment with Hikaru, which will mark her deeply, and her spiritual sacrifice will, however, prove essential in allowing her to ascend to her next step: Minmay, in the end, will consecrate herself as a singer, finally realizing her dream. Sometimes losses and sacrifices are necessary for our growth; if she had not experienced them she would not have consecrated herself as an artist.

This is why her character is so dear to me. Beyond having made history, what I see is the story of a girl who became an adult. Who arrives by finding the SDF-1 Macross and leaves aboard the SDF-2 Megaroad.

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And how beautiful is the scene in which she keeps time with her heel... It is her way of preparing for what awaits her next. In the background, the infinite possibilities that the - radiant - future ahead of her has to offer.

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The cover single of the film, "Ai oboete imasu ka?", is inspired by the German song Lili Marleen, which became famous during the Second World War and was listened to by soldiers at the front (on both sides). The ending theme, "Tenshi no Enogu" is the representation of Minmay's consecration as an artist, performed at her farewell concert on Earth. A melancholic but at the same time hopeful song, which will deliver one of the most powerful and evocative choruses I've ever listened: "Sad events stained even my heart blue/ I'll repaint it with angel's paint/Any way I want".

There are two frames that always make me cry: the first is that of a resolute Minmay in the foreground, in profile and with a smile on her face. The second is that of her consecration, marked by the applause of the audience.

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These songs, as I've mentioned before, have been my inner strength ever since. I believe in hope. And I believe that "Tenshi no Enogu" truly teaches us how even after the saddest moments one can always find the strength to move forward, getting back on one's feet again.

To wrap up this brief chat, I wanted to mention something that struck me: I follow the VTuber Nerissa Ravencroft, and in her latest single "Blue World," the ending mentions being proactive about wanting to paint and bring color to something. While there are some differences compared to the concept of "Angel’s Paint" in Iijima’s song, I was very impressed to see that the exact same concept - giving color to something, or repainting it as we wish - has resurfaced today in a completely different context. Evidently, it is one of those cyclical themes that tends to return over time.

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u/Substantial-Photo771 — 3 months ago