u/Successful-Bad3842

Best Way to get Feedback on a Horror Game Writing

I'm making a horror game and for the most part all the scenes and flow of the story seem to be finished, but I would love to get feedback on both the story as a whole and if the motives and behaviors throughout the game fall well within horror and my original premise. I'm not a writer one bit, so it's been a big learning experience.

I wish I could post on here as well to get feedback, but the way its segmented, it doesn't flow like a typical chapter in a novel, it's more like a design document that discusses the story and the behaviors of every actor involved within each of the story beats.

How or where would you go to get feedback on something like this? I feel as if story telling for a game feels different than trying to write a story for a novel, so its extra difficult.

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u/Successful-Bad3842 — 11 hours ago