u/TASTYBABIES420

First Composition (want to improve it)

Hello, I’ve been teaching myself piano for about 2 years on and off now, and tonight I played my first piece made entirely on my own. I’m very proud of myself for doing this, but I would love some feedback on how I could improve the piece. Could anyone give tips on what I could change to make it sound better?

Edit: I posted this once already but kinda forgot the video I have so thats my bad lol.